I looked at the sentences on the google slide and jazzed them up by putting in adjectives, onomatopoeia, verbs and other things that make the sentence more interesting.
Reflection- I liked making the fireworks sentence more interesting because it is fun to describe fireworks. I found it hard to do the car sentence.
Slide 3 and Slide 4 were my favourite "jazzed up" sentences ... your confident use of adjectives, verbs and onomatopoeia (that is such a hard word to spell) made it possible for me to see and hear your very interesting sentences - well done JJ.
ReplyDeletethat last one made me reminded me when i got covered in mud
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