W.A.L.T: Use descriptive words and language to make our writing more interesting.
We did this piece of descriptive writing to practice using descriptive words and language.
In The Jungle
In The Jungle the enormous elephant emerged from the green leafy trees that were swishing quietly in the wind. When the magnificent grey elephant got out of the trees he started to stare at the Turquoise deep pond that was rocking peacefully. The pond was as deep as the depths of the ocean. It is as dangerous as a tornado. Close by the stripey zebras are grazing peacefully.
Two stars and a wish:
1st star: putting together the story.
2nd star: getting descriptive words
Wish: I wish I had time to finish more of the story.
hi im sophie nice to meet you josie. good powerful amazing writing. im only nine and your writing is better then mine. good job keep on doing it.
ReplyDeleteHi josie your writing make sence but better than all of your class mates i am 8 years old my name is teina. you a 7
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